Leave me here

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 2, 2005


Laying, crying
Pouring over the floor
This fu**ed up life
I want no more

Till the sun burns out
Blinding these twisted eyes
Let this be my fate
Let me live and die

Where alone
My body shall remain
People won't bother
Won't take the blame

Ripped my heart out
Shoved it back down
You laughed hard
And won't even frown

Pull over
Give me that gun
It's finally time
For a burnt out sun

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  • 18 years ago

    by CrimsonRayne

    Great poem so much emotion, you took a subject and excelled it. keep writting.

    ~liz~

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    another great one! 5/5
    ~Christina

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Wow that was so awsome so little words you i saw the picture so clearly

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Amazing. Really good you wrote it brilliantly. Stunning emotion. Plz comment and vote on some of mine xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    wow i loved that poem!!!!

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