Silently dead

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 2, 2005


Every moment
Passing by my heart is breaking
I know now
This life is to be for taking
Silently dead
Murdered in my hearts sorrow
To death
The man of black I will follow
So damn happy
Our bond was strong beyond belief
Like spring
It fell like an autumn leaf
I can't stand
These memories of us that murder me
Like winter
the death of sorrow and one us to be
You left
Behind you put your own pain
Moved on
Slipped past you like sands of grain
I'll leave
Decisions of my black swollen heart
To you
I'll get a new life, a brand new start

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I liked the way one line was lng and one was short, it gave me the idea of someone elese saying the short line more deep.

    The flow was pretty good and i did enjoy reading it, mainly because of the line thing I really liked it =]

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    So vivid i could see it all another great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    That was such a good poem! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Corrie

    I didnt really get this one too much, but I tend not to understand the "deep"poems like this, so maybe its just my blondeness? lol! *KISSES*~Corrie

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