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by Fierce   Jun 4, 2005


Now the time has risen
For this young girl to show her gift
Hoping her dad will see them
And his heart she hopes to lift

Bursting out in glory
Her bright light shone
Showing him her beauty
Which he thought she had none

A dazzling performance
The crowd were in tears
He saw the talent he had missed
After tormenting her all these years

A young star
Rising to fame
Although he missed the talent
He was there to acclaim

Chasing away the numbered fans
Knowing it isn't just a game
She took it all in
Knowing things won't ever be the same

She took a deep breath, tears glazing her eyes
She admired her strength and her priceless worth
God was with her all the way
From now on and since birth

This poem is about my dad and how he has tried to bring me down my whole life and now is my chance to fight back!!!

Please vote/comment, it would mean A LOT to me!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww, i see your strength. Nice job, hun!

    <3 Heather.

    STAY STRONG!

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    this is a great poem! dont ever let anyone put you down...you have lots of talent, no one can take that away from you! keep your head up high, and reach for your goals! keep up your geat work! take care. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    that was a faultless poem it was soo well written and im sorry your dad treats you like this great job though

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    awww! so great, you must be such a strong person, great poem.
    i hope this helped in releasing your pain
    love
    sammi morris

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Excellent poem. The flow was perfect and could envision the scences you created here. GREAT JOB!

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