I love you mommy

by Lyla   Jun 7, 2005


I love you mommy please don't leave
There is one thing that i strongly believe
That my life would be ruined
Just you wait and see
I love you mommy please come back
I feel like I'm going to have a heart attack
I miss you so much
I miss feeling your touch
When you wiped away my tears
I love you mommy where have you gone?
But it is with you I truly belong
I'm feeling scared and lonely without you here
For there is nobody to protect me from all my fears
I love you mommy why did you have to go?
My depression was too much so now I'm six feet below
But don't worry I'll see you again
We will meet with each other up in heaven

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    i liked this poem. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    Awwwww.....that's so sweet
    ~Emmy

  • 18 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow good poem and good twist at the end. the only think id comment on was the lack of decription...put more imagery, similies and metaphors in ur work and it wud really improve...but all the same was good poem :)
    please comment on some of mine
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    omg this is a sad poem :)

    em i commented and voted on 3 of your poems and am going to do more plz repay :)

    great poem, maybe a little work but great idea

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Wow that was such a great poem! 5 I love my mommy to!!!!

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