VERY GOOD!!!

As I said, I do not like depression poems, and this wasn't an exception. I really think that if you are going to write depression poems that they have to be original, I'm sorry but I did not like this poem. The structure of the poem was good. And the flow was alright, but I've heard the message a million times before. Try to broaden your horizons and write a bit more outside of the box.

this poem was really good...it showed alot of emotion!

Wow this is how i feel at this very second
this is great 5/5

arsome poem keep it up

~Erin

Emotional. I loved it!

ROLO. I don';t know. I remember tha name. And it's not common for someone to pick that as their id name. U know? ah. It's annoying me. haha:) Well u can sure as hell write whoever you are :-d

Well done! You really pulled that off...I think I prefer your lengthier ones, but this is still good work!

I don't think I ever thanked you for that last comment...so thanks :) I'm sorry you're going through such rough times...things will get better...in time

xxx

I am so... *Jaw hangs open* that is amazing! this... I really love this poem.

Wonderful hun. Lots of strong emotion in the poem, and if anybody does that to u I want them to die a painful and slow death(kinda like getting ur toenails pulled off)lolumm...anyway great poem i like it!!
Juls

O__O...woow....the ending shocked me! And...oh my god...this is just the most awesome darkest poem I have ever read! Really, really great job! 199992929292/5 (if there is such a thing)

Excellent job... I loved your words.... very nice keep it up..:) 5/5

From me, you get a 5. ^o^ I loved the begining, I loved the middle, and I was amazed at the end. This is a really great poem!

Nice poem,nice twist

I love dis poem so much ... wow ....umm...yea its really good

Wow...this poem was so intense, the wording, the flow everything just went together plus that ending was great...once again wow!

Wow...just wow

Very touching, grips you into the poem wheither u want to be there or not, very good

I LOVE YOUR POEM. PLEASE MAKE MORE. I LOVE IT <3 AWESOME!

It was a good poem

I'm in AWWW,The ending was shocking to find out it was you.Don't you hate it when you've realized that you're the one for all the pain and problems.