Not my best and has no title

by disturbed one   Jun 10, 2005


This is definitely not one of my best but its the only one I can find right now.

Have you ever met someone,
You get that feeling inside,
And just want to have fun,
You heart begins to glide,

Once you get too high,
You think you have it all,
The King of the sky,
When in fact you only begin to fall,

On a crash course,
Past the point of return,
Hit reality with extreme force,
A Second chance you cannot earn,

When I see you,
I become that way,
My heart turns black and blue,
On my mind,A terrible trick you play.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw that is very cute! And it's a very good poem! 5/5! Thanks for the comment on mine it ment alot!

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by TaTtErEdXhEaRt

    i liked this..its kinda what im feeling now..

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    hey desiree i dont understand what you are saying..."that poem if mine wasnt true" i think its a typo that is throwing me off and i dont get it...plz respond

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    thanks for you comments...that wasnt even close to my best either so i cant imagine what my rating would be and how your comments would be if i used my best stuff...i cant find it though

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    nice work. <3

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