Tin Soldiers

by Gem   Jun 10, 2005


Tin soldiers cry in the night
As you try to sleep.
Souls made of metal
All hurt the same as you.
Every one is scared of what
Hides in the depths of the dark.

In the day they stand strong,
Ready to fight the world.
But when the day is done
And the sun goes down,
They cower in the darkness
Just like you.

You are the general of an army
Built on fear of life.
Each tin soldier clutching hope
Of the ballerina doll.
Not brave enough to die.
Not brave enough to live.

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  • 16 years ago

    by GemmaR

    This poem is excellent, loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    That was deep and very good, it was brilliant,5/5 xox Bam

    Ijust sore your post on that depression thing, and im fully backing you, those chicks are just looking for a fight, and i would love to kick them and show them that they are all mouth, dont listen to a word they say, i just wanted you to know that im here for you although i may be so far away.. but i dont want your life gone.. coz of those b**tches tryna stir S**t.. just stay strong aye, and hang in there, depression is a hard thing to handle. my whole family has it but we sorta stick together and are always here! like ill be here for you if you ever need to chat..
    im sorry that was soo long but it was worth it for me..

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    The title is really captivating & the poem is wonderful! Great Job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    Brillant poem xxx

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