The Perfect Hate

by Chad   Jun 12, 2005


Once upon a time I was strong.
Without a single wrong.
Once upon a time I was full of love.
Flying above life, like a dove.

How can that be true?
I should get a clue.
Now I am foolish and weak.
How could I be so meek?

The perfect hate?
And I would be the perfect bait.
Holding onto nothing, trying to make life a reality.
Loosing life a sanity.

Screw it, i'm done.
But this game has just begun.
Once upon a time was long ago.
How could I become so low?

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    That is awesome love the ryhme sceam...and the rythem. 5/5!

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    i felt tah in my heart man. great job once again. you definately are asuperb writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Original. Well written. I like.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Yeah it's cool....thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow another good poem. 5/5 i think im gonna add you to my favorites...if thats ok