by Renee Jun 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Living with this ball-and-chain |
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Excellent poem! I t was very deep and flowed nicely |
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Brilliance. I love it. Metaphorical and effective. I love your style. |
by Natalie84
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The truth shall set you free...lol I like that!!! |
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Your poems are very mysterious but captivating! Loved it 5* |
by Nici
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The rhythm in this piece works well and it is refreshing to see a poem where the author realises that there is no need for forced rhyming. |