Her & Him.

by InMyWorld   Jun 13, 2005


Hey guys...i wrote this a very long ago but it had a lot of meaning to me. enjoy :)

comprehension dawns and mixed emotions spread
whats going on, how could he do this?
is running through her head
welcome, cold shoulder, make yourself at home
turn me away, make me forget, i don't need him anymore

i look between the two of them
my best friends torn apart again
is this what love is supposed to do
make it stop, cause I'm tearing up inside

this wasn't supposed to happen
it wasn't supposed to be this way
confusion, deception, winding their way in
now its all a memory, he's washing away
like his number on her hand

I'm caught center stage
without an explanation
he told me things he shouldn't have
said he loved me too
i told her everything, what would you do?
and now they're through

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    That is a very deeply emotional poem. It's very well done with good rhythme and imagery. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    Good poem, but didn't really like the lines being long then getting shorter and shorter, that leads to less syllables per line and makes it a little un-even.

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I love it. It's so full of emotion. Your very talented. Keep it up ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    great job once again

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    WOw that was so interesting and powerful. excellent job. xxx