A River of Her Depression

by ♥Oh... What a Perfect Tragedy I am♥   Jun 14, 2005




She screams for help
as the river's current pulls her under
a river mad up of her depression

She sees you
just standing there,
watching her suffer,
doing nothing to save her.

You throw her a rope
but as she grabs it.
u let go
She starts to cry as her current pulls her under

She gives up
She lets the current pull her under
and she never comes back up.

Her depression has killed her as you just watched

her suffer.

Why were u so blind?
Why didn't you save her?
Why did you just watch her suffer?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Very awesome. I loved it.

    xoxoRachel

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    just posted it. check it out

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    OMG! I HAVE A POEM JUST LIKE THAT! IT'S CALLED EVERY MOMENT, I'M GOING TO POST IT RIGHT NOW!

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Brilliant metaphor/simile/whatever :) of what depression is like! It is like a river, it pulls you under while others just watch....5/5 Peace and Luv Lots, //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by NoSurvival

    wow...ur really good u have soo much emotion in ur poems .... just like my friends say i have in mine.... keep it up 5/5

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