I cant hide it any more...

by AhmadAfaneh   Jun 15, 2005


Step in to my arms...
I wanna hold you tight...
I wanna kiss you wild...
i wanna make you light...
give me your right...
i am gonna take you high...
so high above the clouds in the sky...
over there we don't have to hide...
and there we'll spend our beautiful days...
while the sun is teasing us with its rays...
now we can laugh and we can remove the haze...
let us create that sphere...
let us make our love so clear...
for everyone to see...
me bending on my knee...
asking you to marry me.

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com

please vote... i know its so bad but even though just vote as if its bad.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse James

    I like it. It's sweet.
    JJx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Aawww it's so sweet!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    It is not bad! It's great. Beautifully written sweets. It's wonderful:) Keep it up babe. *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Again, great emotional depth is shown in your poems. i loved it!
    ash

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice work. Hope you don't mind an observation, the rhyming seems a bit forced. However, overall a good write, kepp up the writing.

    Regards,

    Steve

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