On the stony way i die... ~*~ R.I.P "ME" ~*~

by AhmadAfaneh   Jun 16, 2005


On the stony way i lie
My eyes are staring at the sky
My time is passing by
My skin starts to dry
To breath hardly i try
No tears is left for me to cry
No one cares to ask "Why?"
And to no one i am gonna say bye
The pain in my chest is growing high
I feel my soul starts to fly
Between me and the life there is no tie
To stay alive at the last gasp i vie
But at last on the stony way i die

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com

In the memory of "ME"....please vote

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxxFull Of Painxxx

    Very good poem life sucks huh

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Wow. are u okay?
    it's beautiful & sad at the same time.
    i hope everythings alright
    5/5 for sure
    bye, take care

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Thanks again for all your comments, it really makes me feel like i belong somewhere

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    The pie part makes it cuter! teehee...

    well, its really good, lots of good words.

    read mine sometime myb? Smiles to you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    You're poem was good. I wanted to thank you for that incredible comment you gave me. You said something about how it would take you along time to reach my level of writing. It means alot to me. The only advice that I have for you is that you should add more to them. But I like them just the way the are too :-)

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

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