Anorexia Part 3

by Taylor   Jun 18, 2005


My boyfriend found out
I didn't think he would
But when he saw me in my swim suit
He said it wasn't good

We were at an amusement park
Standing by the slides
He knew there was something wrong
I saw it in his eyes

"Taylor, this isn't right
I can tell somethings wrong
Your skin is all pale
And you haven't been strong"

"I know your not eating
And this has to end
I know you didn't mean it
And the pain you didn't intend"

I stood there and cried
I knew it was true
I was pretty before
What did I do?

Then he scooped me up
Since I was as light as a feather
And said not to worry
We'll get through it together

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, it would be awesome to have a boyfriend who cares that much! ^^ this was a great poem, written about a hard but true subject! Great job hunny!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow that is so emotionally filled...another masterpeice and I can't wait to read part four. I truely hope that this isn't true though...5/5 :)

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 18 years ago

    by morgan

    wow youre really good at writing arn't you

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholle

    great poem. please comment on my poem "I"

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    I love it. It's very touching and sweet.

    <3 Rachel Morgan