Pretend

I really liked the way you wrote this
poem Steven. and it was so sad as usual. great poem like your other poems. take care,
marjan

Nicely put. I like it. (I'm not very good at critiquing, btw).

:)

another nice one!!! liked it...

Very good.. it flowed very well.. your a good writer i gave ya a 5/5.. stay strong!! things will get better!! some times it takes people more time than what it does others.. bye bye EJ

PS... thanks for commenting on my poem it really meant alot to me!!

a few words can hold a lot of meaning. short but really good. i think i know what your trying to say but then again i am just a mere reader interpreting your words from my point of view. you as the writer hold the true meaning =)

keep up the great work

pretending isn't the best thing...but it works...

~Christina

-yea well compared to most of my friends who have eyes you'll always remember them for...i have boring brown eyes...but i like them lol =)