Questions

by shakenangel   Jun 19, 2005


Why?
Why must you put me through this pain?
Why should I be the one left out in the rain?
As the water pours down my face, this flood
of tears can't make it better.
No more.

How?
How could you stand there and watch me die?
How can my suffering not make you cry?
To see that you have created this monster,
and let it destroy itself.
No longer.

What?
What have you gained through this vicious game?
What makes you think this will bring you fame?
So you can laugh and act tough, but inside
you are just a lonely child.
No feelings.

When?
When will this fear and despair finally end?
When will these eternal bruises just mend?
The answer, you know fine well, is
never, for you have ruined me for real.
Inner scars never heal.

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This is something I started a while ago, when I got bullied a lot. Thankfully it's stopped but I just thought that this was relevant to what happened.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    GREAT idea. I LOVE this poem (and I rarley say that). Dont think I have seen this Idea used before. Dunno about the last line. Its good but it does not tie in with the end to the other stanzas. But would say leave it unless you can find something better. X

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved the way you wrote this poem.
    really beautifully. you're really talented.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Again....great emotion. thanks for the opportunity for me to read these words. I love your form of writing and the way that you incorporate your feelings into poems. Keep it up.

    ~*~Chrsitina~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    I can relate to this one even more than the others as I experience this as well, the poem is brilliant, sorry you had to go through it, well done, well written with good structure and flow, keep it up

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice job! i used to get bullied alot when i was younger, but it stopped after i hit a kid in the face :0) good poem! keep writing!
    luv ya,
    Ashli

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