by Angie Jun 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Why do I cry? |
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I like it.. really enjoyed reading this piece of work.. and i must say you are very talented. Keep writing. |
by Fallen~Tears
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Wow.. i loved this poem.. its definitly my favorite out of the 7 i read.. great job 5/5 |
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This is so sad, I hope things work out at home. There was so amazing imagery in there that made your sadness so accessible. Beautifully written. |
by pseudo
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Awesome write=) Excellent flow and I really like the structure you used. Im sure a lot of people could relate to this.. Im sorry that this is true but when you write from your experiences it helps you feel better, and in your case you've written something truely amazing also they mean alot more=).. amazing write ;) |
by amelia
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Very well written |