by Emily Jun 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Little Jenny's in her room, |
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Fantastic peice, told in a very powerfull mannor thiugh the narrotive style you used. very powerful and deep, with some strong expression |
by Emily
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Whoops, that comment was supposed to go on prayers of an atheist |
by Emily
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Yes, the point of the title was meant to be Ironic |
by Princess09
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This is such an amazing poem, you hit a sore spot and did it good. many people write poems about abuse but you did it with feeling and care. great job 5/5!!! |
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This poem is ok ....it was a sad story but the flow was kinda off in quite a few places...4/5 |