I thin that is one of the best poems I have read… very sad.. great writing girly.

Sad poem, very long, next time space it out a bit, but still good.

I thought this was very very good. It's really sad. I really liked it.

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

Long sad story! Child abuse is so sad and goes on daily. Good job on this poem. You used great detail. Take Care! Brooke~

very good poem.....iwrote one on child abuse but it could never be as good..its called love?
whenever the ryhming dosnt go i usallly comment but even with the rhyming this was a master peice :)
great job x0x0x

Hey that made me cry. :*( It pisses me off that some parents make the decision to scar their child's life forever...even more to know that many of my friends have survived and some barely surviving the horrible experience....hope u r well! Gr8 poem 5/5 Peace and Lotta Luv, //ari\\

aww..that was sad.

Very well written, and wonderfully expressed.

:'( thats so sad

great poem its really hurtful anyways 5/5 for this

this is so sad! i wish i could write something like this... im voting 4/5 because of the rhymeing... but dont get me wrong, it was awesome!!!
Hayley-Ree xxx

no..ur rhym sceem wasn't shakey..it was amazing

wow, ok, so i've read alot of these kinds of poems, but this one was so deep and so descriptive and SO GOOD.. no.. EXCELLENT!! great job.. the rhyming was fine... the flowing was shaky, but i still LOVED EVERY PART!!! 5/5!!

maybe you could check out some of mine!

Wow! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Ummm... never say my middle name online EVER again. lol

the rhyming was good, the flow was a bit off on a few lines. other than that the situation seems a little harsh, but it gets the message across. shock therapy type of thing.
~*Freak*~

*gasps* evil,evil Jenny's daddy! and evil mommy! poor Jenny! this was an awesome poem, but it wa really sad.

WOW! That was intense. I love the narrative part of it. How it's told from a third person. Extremely emotional and sad....it's a shame that there are kids out there who really deal with this on a day to day basis. The rhyming wasn't shaking. The flow was great. I loved it! Again...I can't picture a 12 year old writing this :) The only thing I would suggest although not a big deal....would be to break it up into stanzas. It can make the poem a little easier to read. I lost my place a few times...lol Not a big deal at all! Excellent write! 5/5 :)

omg!!! *tears* thats sooo sad i hate hearing about little kids being hurt!!!

This poem is ok ....it was a sad story but the flow was kinda off in quite a few places...4/5