Before And After

by Chad   Jun 21, 2005


The pain of self hate.
A pain that I did create.
Looking at what I have become.
Inside my heart is shallow and numb.
Let me rest my heart and soul.
Can I escape from this hellhole?
Let me live lives doom.
Never able to understand it\'s gloom.
Now I put the gun to my head.
The floor starts to turn a blood red.
As death nears.
I can see the tears.
I can hear that one word...

He was such a coward.
But we did not need him.
He was stupid and grim.
He was a burden anyway.
We did not want him to stay.
But he did not care.
The way he talked to us was so unfair.
He was just a selfish freak.
We all knew he was weak.
He did not care about anything or anyone.
But then again, he was my only true son...

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow i i didnt get who you were tal;kn abotu till the end..God rigght?? love the way you approached this poem..it was sooooo amazinggggggggg.

    LIS

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    I liked how there was two sides to this poem, it is a different way of writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I liked this one a lot too...i can totally relate...nice job 5/5 hehe i have a poem with the same title...:) anyways nice job...I enjoyed reading all your poems....luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    The title throws me off, and the second stanza seems a little forced. It is a courious way to talk of death...

    ~Breeze

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    *begins to tear up*

    strong, true emotion. amazing. i can relate in my own little way.

    "Let me live lives doom."

    I'm wondering if you meant: "Let me live life's doom." Otherwise...perfect.

    xxx

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