An incomplete cycle(suiside poem)

by ~*~ColdHope~*~   Jun 21, 2005


Everyday
the same thing....
crying
a dry tear
screaming
a silent sound
bleeding
invisible blood
every morning
the same thing.....
people looking
but never seeing
sensing
but never feeling
acknowledging
but never understanding
every night
the same thing.....
sleeping
but never dreaming
lying
but never resting
yawning
but never tiring
today....
something new....
crying
salty tears
screaming
a deafening sound
bleeding
warm blood
tomorrow...
something new again....
sleeping
but never waking
lying
but never standing
yawning
but never breathing
an incomplete cycle...

hey im not to sure about tihs poem so please comment and vote!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweeti

    hey again this is an awesome poem! keep writing and ill keep checking! alwayz -n- forever heather <3's james

  • 18 years ago

    by Terri

    Damn....that was...was...I dont even have words. Very deep. I love your style...they actually have meaning. I'm going to be checking your stuff everyday!!!