Wow..this was beauitful yet sad. i can tell it came from your heart and you said what you felt and got it off your chest. that's a beautiful thing. i can tell you that i can relate to this, because i went through the same situation with my dad. it was depressing and horrible, but it only made me stronger. job well done. 5/5.
This is so incredibly sad. Im sure you've heard it before but pretty much the same thing happened to me. Only we were out in public and everybody saw. I've never held more discust for a person. Anyway good poem.