Drown

by BrokenMisery   Jun 23, 2005


Falling broken, falling down, falling deep
Losing you, losing life, losing what I keep

Water up to my neck, drowning so deep
Flowing through the cracks in the nightmare sleep
Chains hanging smothered in frost
Fingering my neck until the game is lost
For as a puppet controlled in the master's eyes'
Following movements in bleak disguise
Shrieking its terror echoes the mountains high
As I drown in this river dying alive
Eyes wet in misery's hold
Lost from love and burning cold
Lying here as I drown in time so long
Counting the words in the lyrics of a song

Singing a lullaby as my lungs fill with water
Like jars they swallow in murdering slaughter
Faded pictures in my memory rips
Flowing down the river silenced on my lips
Watching the clouds fall to the skies
Screeching for you and love that dies
I watch my eyes fall beneath the surface, down
Watching me drown, drown, drown.

Shiver running through seeping skin
Up my spine and lying within
I loved you and watched as you left
I cried at your feet in dying regret
Going away in eternity's grasp
Holding you dear, you let go the clasp
Falling broken, falling down, falling deep
Losing you, losing life, losing what I keep
Burning ice travels my veins tracing stories long
Counting the words in the lyrics of a song

Singing a lullaby as my lungs fill with water
Like jars they swallow in murdering slaughter
Faded pictures in my memory rips
Flowing down the river silenced on my lips
Watching the clouds fall to the skies
Screeching for you and love that dies
I watch my eyes fall beneath the surface, down
Watching me as I drown, drown, drown.

Falling broken, falling down, falling deep
Losing you, losing life, losing what I keep

Wishing I could have you here
Without you, I have disappeared…

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  • 17 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    *tear followed by applause* great peace 10/5 (if possible) great nice flow nice description nice everything lovely job

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is very emotive and powerful. Great job! Read some of mine if you get time.

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    that was so sad.. i loved the tinge of .. i dunno.. bitterness, maybe?? am not sure.. but it was overall gr8.. i din reli lyk it from the beginning, but it improved a lot by the middle and the end..
    keep up the talent
    and thnx 4 helping me out with the poem
    nonz

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    hey, i tought this was deadly the flow was great and the way you put it all together was good..I don't really think theres anything you could do to make it better i enjoyed it the way it was :D

    much love x)

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    WoW i loved it it was X-cell-ent
    AWEsomE!!!
    ~HazE