The Unforgiven

by April   Jun 24, 2005


I look to the heavens with crimson filled eyes.
A fallen angel sent to my demise.
Cast out of heaven and into this hell.
Banished for my soul I did sell.
Looking for souls I was once sent to save.
Now taking back the lives god generously gave.
Walking within the realm of the undead.
The voices of innocents still in my head.
One voice among them calls to me alone
The one that threw me from heaven my home.
I paid the ultimate price seeking my revenge.
My salvation lost I'll never have my soul again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    i loved it. hope that u find god again and return to the light as i know i must. for the end is comming and i wnat to live in heaven's devine

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Wow just about the best poem I've seen in a while for a short little one. I give you a five and if you havn't already give your self a 5 for this one 2. You deserve it. I've godda come up with rymeing words like you use. There more interesting and make the poem better no matter how short.

  • 18 years ago

    by ranya

    *me in complete shock*... man this poem is wat i call a BOMB. Its very amazing, the way you wrote it and the way it was dark, i especially liked your title..The Unforgiven.. its amazing. Well keep on writing and ill be tuned!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    all your work is amazing.
    i spec love this poem.
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    i love it...it's so0o0o0o dark but yet beautiful at the same time... i don't know i just like it!

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