Together Forever

wow good poem once again short but to the point cute poem...keep it up!!
luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Aw...your poems do seem to be pretty universal...

"In my heart Forever
You will stay"

Instead...I think it may be better as:

"In my heart

You will stay

Forever"

or...

"Forever

In my heart

You will stay"

Just to make the forever more emphasized...
Works how you have it though...lovely work.

xxx

This one is better than the last love poem i read.

This one is better than the last love poem i read.

So sad! Once again so much emotion with just a few words! Great work! ~Brooke~