Sad Girl

by abcede   Jun 25, 2005


She drifts all around
as life flies by
if you look close enough
you'll see in her eye

she's not really there
just living each day
step by step
in her dark world of gray

surrounded by sins
like envy and lust
not knowing love
compassion or trust

to numb her pain
she does cut her skin
sometimes its too small
the cut is to thin

so she digs deeper
to rid of her pain
but nothing changes
it feels the same

scars could result
along with some others
she keeps cutting on
what's just another

but no scars form
it must be a dream
it isn't real
it's not what it seems

she pinches herself
then she does find
it's not a dream
she's out of her mind

but, oh, how she wishes
that she had bled
but what could she do?
she was already dead!

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  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Surprising twist at the end, I loved it...I relate so much to this one, I know what you are going through!!! Great flow and rhyme, keep up tha good work!!!

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    the poem was good!!! it flowed so well together!! you have such great choice of words.. it reminds me of some of my poems.. i guess because yours are also sad but also hold alot of truth to them.. alot of emotion is shown through your writting.. and its beautiful that you can express it so well.. bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Really brilliant but so sad. I liked its
    rhyme. really beautifully written.
    much love, Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    ~awesome poem!!! it was totally moving :-) .... and thanks for reading my poem~

    ~Krissy~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    good job! keep it up!
    luv always,
    Ashli

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