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by abcede   Jun 25, 2005


Her ice cold hands
and cold blue stare
he'd given in
to evil's dare

what would he do?
where would he go
if they found out
well, they can't know

i'm sorry pal
you've traded fate
letting your life
be filled with hate

I'll just tell you
a secret of mine
oh, just please look
at evil defined

i see your face
you need a hand
I'll brake it down
but it ain't to grand

evil doesn't
care who you are
it sucks you in
you think you're a star

only thing worse
than giving torment
you do hurt too
that's evil's intent

what you do need
upon your side
is some strong faith
or simply a guide

once you have that
your life will be true
evil will die
you'll start life anew!

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  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    tht was really good i felt like that poem was written i've been there w/ having to fix my mistakes...great poem
    ~lisa lisa~

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    It's not one of your best but it's still good. I saw a few errors...but I like the feel to it. It's a change, and a refreshing one at that. Nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    You have a gift with rymeing. 5

  • 18 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    i dont know why u havent gotten ne votes or comments on this one but i like it