HELP

by abcede   Jun 25, 2005


My life just got caught
I'm starting to sink
i see my life flash
don't know what to think
please don't let me down
I'm begging you, man
believe in yourself
believe that you can
just don't be afraid
you are my last hope
go reach with your hands
or go get a rope
I'm losing my breath
come on, you're the one
why won't you save me
man, i am your son!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Short, sweet, and to the point. Good ending too. You're awesome!
    -Jaime

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    great poem 5/5!! very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    very beautifully written. you're so talented.
    much love, Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It's pretty good. Short but it flows alright and rymeing at times can make poems excilent. I'll give you a 4
    Oh and im not saying you would have gotten a five if you rymed...because you did ryme. yey u!

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