Curbside Heart

by Chris   Jun 26, 2005


***i don't really like this one but lemme know what you think anyways***

Left with a tear
with eyes full of fear
an empty heart
chewed and ripped apart
left in the rain, cold to the bone
the hurting had to have shown
a feeling like this, i just don't deserve
I'm begging, please, don't leave my heart on the curb
it's the only one i have
but I'm not ready to part
with my empty heart
i feel so lost
you never should have tossed
my heart, thrown it away
maybe someone will pick it up one day

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  • 16 years ago

    by thehaunted

    Wow, intense. it's good. what a way to show emotion. (i see that chicks are starting to hit on u) p.s. love ur other poems

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Hidden*Behind*This*Smile~

    hey this is a good poem and very sad it sound like a break up poem tho no offense tho its good kk well if you wanna talk e-mail me caliz_chicka@yahoo.com yu seem kool and like me kk *Tracy*

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    wow...very good poem...i almost cried that feeling has to hurt i'v felt like that before you described it very well and with great emotion perfect choice of words...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    good rhymes.. its a good poem..
    not much not to like.. if that made sense.. haha so yea nice job man

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    I liked it all... until the ending... maybe if you changed a bit around... it would sound more....... poemetic? but I liked the begining. <3 xoxo

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