yeah...it was thru some poetry contest supported by my school :) also, i sent some poetry into an editing company and asked them to review me for publishing :) it took a long time..but it was worth it

wow.. i like this poem!! its different and it speaks the truth! great job!!!

maybe you could check out some of mine?!

i love this one too, ur a good writer, keept it up

One of the best poems about life yet! Lol, good job.

So very good. I realy liked this one.

Well done, particularly the last line....very nice.

aww that was really good i liked it :)

wow, it's very beautifully written.
you're really talented.
much love, Marjan

Absolutely beautiful! Very well written! Remember our past mistakes make us who we are today. I know I have made plenty in my life. Great message in this poem! I really enjoyed reading this! Take Care! Brooke~

I love the part at the end about needing somone to turn to and mend cuts "before they bleed". Its so insightful and makes you believe that there is someone out there who people can turn too. Good work:D:D
kate x~X~x

ok it was good but ive hear other like it so not very unique

excellent poem...So true and very inspirational..I totally agree with you. xxx

great flow, 5/5

Another great poem keept it up

WOW! I really love this. It has a very strong message to it too. You got a lot of talent girly!
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxoxoxo

omg thats realy beautiful nd inspiring...ur a great writer never stop writing!! 5/5

very well written, keep it up n take care

Sara

I love your writing! you keep it going and you don't stop, you know how to end it just right, great job!! 5/5

You really are a wonderful writer, take care, I'm am adding you to my favorites...

*tear* spoken from the mouth of a true genius. The world needs more poetry like this one. kilman = David B. 5/5