Which way is Heaven?

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 26, 2005


Which way is Heaven?
Which way is Heaven?
She wanted to know.
For Hell was the place she did not want to go.
But the old man she asked just didn't know.
So she searched where it was because she wanted to go.
Which way is Heaven?
She wanted to know.
But every one she asked they just didn't know.
But she knew that Heaven is across from Hell.
So she went to the church when she heard the ringing bell.
And when the cession ended she walked up to the preacher.
For she just had the thought that the preacher could teach her where Hell is.
All he said was that Hell was where anything bad or evil was.
And she thought of evil and she thought of bad.
But all of these thoughts just made her sad.
For she realized she did
that this world is Hell.
And the only way to leave the Earth is to kill herself now.
She didn't want to be in Hell.
So she took a long knife and she pointed it towards her.
Then everything was dark and in a blur.
For she was dieing....and then she was dead.
She sat up and put her hand to her head.
She just thought to herself how could I be so stupid?
And realized what sin shes made and where she must go...
Then she looked up and saw fire and felt evil all around.
Suddenly her heart began to pound.
Then she stood up and said "I am dead."
And around her came a light.
A very bright light.
But it wasn't of god or good.
It quickly turned to dark.
And from the shadows that lied before her
was the Devil himself.
He just stood there and glared.
Then he said only this "Any time one kills them-self no matter if a search for Heaven or not, will shurly go to Hell for being so foolish as to think there was a Heaven at all."
She just sat back down.
Put her head twoards the ground.
And realized that there is no Heaven to be found.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    Wow what a great poem
    keep up your beautiful work

    5/5
    lana

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Whoa! how awesome and dark...i absolutely loved the ending...u hav so much talent and the rhyming scheme works really well....keep it up!
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow thats great! you have an amazing imagination! i find it hard to write about things that arent actually things that happen in my life or that arent my own emotions and i think its great that you can do that, yet have so much emotion in it. great work =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    Like I said sometime heaven doesn't seem real!!

  • 18 years ago

    by April

    Awesome poem. i love how it draws you in. 5/5 keep up the good work. plz comment and rate some of mine.
    ~ApRiL