Wished on an airplane

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 27, 2005


I lay beneath the starry sky
and the sacred moon
I hummed allowed to my self a little tune
Then there I saw a shooting star
that flew right past the moon
Then I thought I better make a wish very soon
I wished the world wasn't so cruel
But such a fool I was inned
for the world was so full of greed
And so much evil we did not need
But I was a fool I was indeed for a star was not of which I wished upon
An airplane I wished on
An airplane indeed
That wish will lead to nothing
And that's enough said
for in the morning
I woke to be dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    3rd line: "I hummed allowed to my self a little tune"
    should be: I hummed ALOUD to myself a little tune

    11th line:"But I was a fool I was indeed for a star was not of which I wished upon"
    that line is way too long, break it into two lines so it flows better.
    and the line its self does not sound right, change it to like:
    :But I was a fool I was indeed
    for a star was not what I wished upon"

    last 2 lines:
    "for in the morning
    I woke to be dead"
    i think you should take that part out, it just doesnt fit in with the poem, it has nothing to do with it.

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