Thanks! Thats really good advice! ill do that

Wow...this poem was really really good, i like your technique of rhyming, you did very well and I can easily easily relate, i'm sure alot of people can!! keep it up!! 5/5

oh wow..that was soo beautyful! i really loved it. you are a very promising writer, keep up the good work1!!

WOw...that was excellent. it flowed so well in everything. I can well relate to this too...and I am sure many others could too. xxx

this is a very good poem....came form the heart....the only thing i'd change is the line "if i hadnt of been so crushed" it threw off the flow a bit(notice...only a lil bit) anothr good poem!!

You have a way of lacing emotions into your work instead of simlpy displaying them, it makes for a very good read.

aw i really like this poem. again your a great writer...i'll prolly keep sayin that after i read your other ones but honstly i love your writing!

wow.. cant say anythin but i do love this stuff... T_T

Hey again I love this poem too. Your just good all the way arround. If u could plz read a poem by me. I only have two for now. One is "In my dreams"and the other "My love dearest"lots of love Bridgette

wow it's very wonderful I like how truely you described your feeling...good Job

Hey, that's a really sweet poem !! I really like it, Well done, keep up the good work !! Love Charli X x x x x ~*~

that was awesome. i cried when i read it. i feel the same way about my most recent relationship. i still love him sooooo much. thats exaclty how i feel. id love to give you a 100/5 on this poem but i cant. so ill have to settle for 5/5. that was an awesome poem. keep writing.

kelsey
xoxoxo

Kelsey, thanks so much! Wow, you dont know how much that means to me. I'm soo happy you liked it!

Great job! it can relate to so many ppl, like myself, and is very well written!

Excellent poem, I have to agree with everyone else, well written, it flowed well, and the message was strong. Take care.

Aww that was such a cute poem! 5