by Elynnka Jun 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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One winter day, she sat outside alone, |
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Amazing poem. Very sad- Loved the feeling put into it. Keep writing, don't waste your talent. Unless of course.. you want to.. haha. 5* |
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Genius:|...but sad..5/5 ;) |
by ~*Ley*~
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this was so sad and powerful. sends the message deep inside the reader. you have talent. by the way, the poem Pretty Girl was no inspired by my homelife whatsoever...but I'm flattered that you thought so because it compliments my creativity. 5/5 |
by Jordan
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Jeez, this poem was seriously incredible. It flowed so perfectly and was absolutley amazing! |
by Azurite King
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That poem is short, really sad, and easy to read! I love it. Excellent poem! |