Comments : My Promise...

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    wow... that's definately my favorite you have written!! 5/5.. AWESOME JOB!
    love always,
    Abcede

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    awww that is really good. I hope you can keep this promise because I am sure he would be so happy about it, take care hun xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    wow. this poem was really really good. ur a really good poem writer and you have every reason to brag. :) anyways thanx for commenting

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well written, and made ever better by the emotion laced throughout. I can relate in a very large way.

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    wow thats is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    OMG! This is exactly the problem I had! I cut myself after I made the promise to my boyfreind and messed stuff up. Great poem!
    Love always,
    Haily
    xoxoxxooxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I give your poem a 5..I love your poem because it reminds me of my promise to my boyfriend about me stopping cutting myself...i love it so keep up the good work...~steph~

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    wow i can relate so well...i loved this poem it was realy good u r really talented!!! keep writing!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    wow i really liked this...i can also relate. i went through the same thing and my boyfriend made me promise to stop cutting and to go to him for help...it was hard, but it worked. take care and good job :)

    Sara

  • Oh wow. that is really good.5/5..that is the same promise i made to my b/f. i really liked that poem keep up the good work..

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    wow 5/5 lovely but sad poem but well done im glad to hear youve ot such a great bf .take care/

  • 18 years ago

    by ChocolateXtc

    I loved it its the exact same thing that happend to me but he did leave me when i broke the promis the first time. keep up the good work tho

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    wow thats a really big promise. when my boyfriend first found out I cut he tried to make me promise I would quit, and when I didn't he broke up with me, we're back together now and Iv'e made the same promise, so I know how that is. I hope it all works out for you! and also, great poem! are you showing it too him??
    ~Christina

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    I can relate very very well! i liked your writing and you kept it vivvin (as in you kept it goin great and straight) great job!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Not only was that extremely well written, but it also flowed well and had a very powerful message, absolutely wonderful. Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by sara

    this poem is great lots of props!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    Don't lose him. I lost my girl to cutting and that only made me do it more. Do whatever you can to stop. kilman = David B. 5/5 (wish I could give it more)

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    This is an excellent poem hun! I can totally relate to this poem! 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem Ashley!! I voted a 5! wow!! =D Please check out my new poem "Endless Love" thanks a lot.. hugs

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Once again, wonderful poem. I'm so glad you were able to make such a promise. I hope you keep it, and I wish you luck. Again, very well written...just great. I think you've just earned a spot on my favorites. =) Keep writing! You have great talent.

    ~rolo