Great song. I don't think the title is catching though...but not sure what else I would call it.

Well done, I like the last verse, right before the chorus especially. Very nice.

i love it! this song is really good. lol i could just sing it...great work!

5.5

love and hugs

catchy song i would listen to it
5/5

I like it. kind of cool

so well done the opening line really drew me in

this is awesome

i think that your song is great i am currently suffering from a rare full blowen attack of bipolar and its great to know that someone else nos wat it feels like cheers babe

Now this one I really like. Lovely work with this song.

"I'm trying to hard
But now it's to late
I'm to ignorant
To give into fate"

Should be:
I'm trying toO hard
But now it's toO late
I'm toO ignorant
To give into fate

Other than that, great.

great work my friend

Very good. The end of the chorus was hard to follow, i would love to hear it sung! Good job!

well now it's perfect...i like the chorus too. :)

great poem, i like it 25/5! =)

very deep song indeed! like the emotion and structure behind it. come check out some of my writings if you have the time...

wow! this was a excellent song! i wonder how it actually sounds!...this was ma fav part:

"I take a step forward
But then I'm back
I look at my life
And it all goes black"

Real creative ans nicely put! Keep up da awesome work!....also thanx for ur kind words regarding my own poetry!
Good Luck!
~Chica~