Just a Thought

by michelle suzzanne   Jul 2, 2005


Just a little thought in my head
Could leave me out cold, alone,
and maybe even dead.

Thats why I can no longer feel the pain in my arm,
I can still see the blood
and I know I've done harm.

You might be wondering why I did it,
But I don't really know,
I guess all I can do now is let the blood flow...

The Blood is now gone
and my arm is still numb.
I guess I was trying to hide from the pain that was yet to come.

I was trying to feel the pain you are going through.
I guess I did it because
I love you.

Because, Just the thought of you being in that much pain.
Just that thought,
is driving me insane.

I mean you're just a little kid
But that doesn't give me a right to do what i did.
I now know what I thought was wrong
I now know I have to be strong.

I have to be brave,
And my words are true.
I have to make sure you see this through.

Because,
if I ever want our lives to be happy,
I have to stop thinking
And be there for you Abbie.

note: Abbie is my 6 year old niece who I love like a little sister.
And she is no longer sick and she lives a happy healthy life. I don't know what I would have done if I lost her.This poems makes me cry, so I hope you like it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xlostxsoulx

    Hey! i loved this poem. really emotional. im glad your niece is all better...i lost family b4 its hard to go through. cya!!! keep it ^!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sing me another sad song

    thank u so much for voting on my poem!!^_^ ok, now i will say this, i did like the poem u wrote, i liked it lots, so keep the work up!

    Love, JessI

    P.S. i voted 5 for ur poem^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    A couple tiny errors...

    "Thats why I can no longer fell the pain in my arm," --Should be "feel"

    "I mean your just a little kid" - Should be "you're"

    I'm pretty sure about those corrections...I know it's sometimes easy to miss minor errors in your own work...

    Anyways, I'm so glad she's no longer sick. The poem is heartfelt and personal. Nice job :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Hello. This poem is really good I like it a lot. That's good that your niece is healthy now!! Well anyway I gave your poem a 5! Will you comment on my poems it would mean a lot. Thanks. Good JOb.

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