The warmth

by Jasonsboo   Jul 2, 2005


I feel the warmth
I feel the pain
Sometimes I feel
I have nothing to gain

I feel the hurt
I feel the sorrow
Knowing I'll feel
The same thing tomorrow

The times I feel these
Emotions and hear these sounds
Are only when
Your not around

The times I hurt
and cry these tears
Are only when
You are not near

That's why I need you
Always by me
Never leaving
Forever with me

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Good Poem, Try finding more expressive words to have a deeper feel and better flow, but hey we have our weakness, but its still a great poem, 5/5 keep it up

    ~David~ HuNky

  • 18 years ago

    by K1n9d0m

    very good i love it and keep it up 5/5 take care
    peace rel.....

  • 18 years ago

    by LoverBabeNikki

    Hey i really liked this poem it was very good! thanx 4 reading my poem and commenting i will contenue to read your poems if you dont mind will you read " Hidden on the Inside" and tell me what you think!

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