The Glow

by Toni   Jul 3, 2005


The sun is rising in the distant shadows
Glowing hues into the dark
As a silhouette lays down her head
And rests her bleeding heart

Silence chokes her peaceful slumber
Forcing tears into her eyes
And as the dawn cascades around her
She’s held by her disguise

Motionless, she’s lulled by pain
Driving spears inside her head
Sore and shaking below the glow
A silhouette upon on my bed

Silent tears fall on the floor
As I realise what I’ve become
I try to take the pain from her
But still I am so numb

Treading across the dusty room
I reach out to the light
The only thing I know that’s real
Inside this endless plight

The sun-drops burn my tired eyes
And as I raise my hands
Reality slips right through my fingers
Like flowing grains of sand

This is my time, before it’s too late
Her pain will soak me through
I stand before her crimson gown
With nothing else left to do

Skin to skin, pale, complex
Our fingers intertwine
Wrapping woes around the glow
I feel her soul is mine

And I feel

Nothing

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  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    lost for words, so many out standing lines and images. wow
    keep it up, luv always -x-x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    ..But we'll bring you back together again, one day <3

    I love yoo, more than you know..

    ♥♥♥
    Take care of yourself..

  • 18 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Wow, wondeful poem Toni.

    My favourite stanza was:
    ''Silent tears fall on the floor
    As I realise what I’ve become
    I try to take the pain from her
    But still I am so numb''

    Stay strong hun, You're a beautiful and caring person inside and out and you deserve to live in total happiness. It will get better hun, your pain will go away.

    Take care darlin, sending all my love.

    Hugs,
    Shell xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    hun... i have to admit i am a bit worried by this verse

    This is my time, before it’s too late
    Her pain will soak me through
    I stand before her crimson gown
    With nothing else left to do

    especially

    This is my time, before it’s too late

    I really hope you are ok... Amazing poem... i dont know how you write so many good ones... Brilliant!!

    Take Care!

    MMMWAH!!!
    I Love You!!!

    - .o0 Olipop 0o.

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