Not Exactly Death

by undying blusher   Jul 3, 2005


Faced with life and death
Which would you chose?
Me?
Tell you the truth
I wouldn’t mind going
Not at all
I’d like to leave now
I think I’ve heard enough
Seen enough
Learned enough
To know this world
How ‘bout you?
Which would you choose?

As time passes
I change more and more
I no longer want to die so bad
I just don’t want to live
Even if it's not so bad now
I’ve had enough
I think I’m ready now
I’m ready now
I don’t exactly choose death
I’m just not choosing life
Whatever that means
I'm not certain myself
So I’m just waiting here
Waiting to be let go
Waiting for my last cold
The day I die
I’ll be happy
Finally
I can relax
It’s over now
Or is it?
That’s one relapse
What if I continue to burn
even after my departure?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    This is exactly how I feel and have felt.
    You're an awesome writer

  • 18 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    wow, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Thank you all for the comments. I'm glad you think my "very diff" style works. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    as bec said, you have a very different style of writing. and I love it. it's fresh and different and thats what I've been wanting to read and write.

    take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    nice questions that leave you thinking... good work!
    this is great you have a very diff style of writting but you make it work! go girl
    >>5/5<<
    *bec* xXx

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