thanks for the comment....really great job writing this poem...

awsome work..! 5/5! keep it up... hugs

my sister told me 2 check out ur poems and i saw u on da disscussion thingo so im like wat the heck.. n OMG i cant relate 2 this so well its totally amazing 5/5 and i love greenday 1 ;) lol take care luv rach

This was a great poem

Hey ..that was simply...amasing. That poem just puts everything im feeling into words .You are extremely talented...keep it up check out mine some time

x-xStephx-x

Good poem it was great!

Thanks for ur R/C's

-Josiah

very good write...i love it

Simply beautiful.

"You don't even move even though your so near."

I believe it should say "...you're so near." Other than that, excellent.

xxx

that is how i feel about taylor. great poem. loved it 5/5

good jod......I like ur poem....i hope u check mine 2....i know urs is way better hoping u made a comment 2 mine 2.....!!!!!!!

love it!!

Great poem...i can relate. Keep it up luv Amy XxX

WOW! great poem i loved it! fantastic job! ("\(^_^)/")

i LOVE this poem.......i feel ur pain!

I scream on the inside, hoping you'll hear,
You don't even move even though your so near.
* I just love that part*

Very nice poem. I loved it.

Nana

Wow, I haven't seen a great love poem in awhile! Good job, and keep writing!

Oh my god! That was a perfect poem! your really talented .. seriously keep it up ! Somehow you captured exactly how i felt about this one person i really really liked. Keep writing... ur pro!
Jess xox <3

hey i LOVE this poem and i love how u write. everything flows beautifullly and i can totally relate to this poem. it is awful, that feeling of not being able to let go even if u are just doing urself more harm holding on. well anyways keep up the awesome poems.
oh yeah, and ur right cause green day SO TOTALLY ROCKS!!!!!!

I thought that the poem was great and i inderstand how you feel. So keep up the good work and maybe you should check out the poem that i have written. Good job!

Good job! That was a very good poem, very sad but well written, good job and keep up the good work! I gave it a 5/5,