Your No Dad

by Donna   Jul 6, 2005


Why do I know you,
Why are you here,
I don't want you,
Stand clear.

I'm about to blow,
It's all your fault,
I know the truth,
You love me not.

You call me your daughter,
but your no dad,
you left me hanging,
your the one who's been had.

I'm tired of it,
all your lies,
leave me alone
lets live our separate lives.

Forget about me,
I'll forget about you,
It was your choice,
your choice to choose.

You choose her,
the skinny hag,
so go away,
your no dad

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    So your dad cheated on your mom? maybe make that part a little more clear. umm other then that once again your using a pretty basic vocab but thats okay because i think this poem had a lot of feelings behind it the flow was off in some areas but only a few i really liked this 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Yeah, I like this poem. It's very short and simple to goes straight to the point. One thing that bothers me is when you type "your" I really think you meant "you're".

    That's all M'Dear.

    "I'm about to blow,
    It's all your fault,
    I know the truth,
    You love me not."

    A very nice stanza.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    hmm i liked this poem. its really good, i like your style of writing. keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ok you must really hate your dad, really felt the hate!!!! Hope that you are ok?? Great poem, very emotional and sad..

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Donna

    thanks guys

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