Wither

by *theloved1*   Jul 7, 2005


Sometimes i feel that
i just can't ever be
just me
like i am locked up
in a room
by myself
with no one to talk to
so i talk to me
and i say
what happened to you?
when did it happen?
and why are you
letting it take over you?
JUST
LET
IT
GO!
but i can't
its too hard
i can't just let it go
because it's been there
so long
the loneliness is
a part of me
i've grown attached to it
and i will wither
if i force it away.
don't come too close
to me
i am
so lonely
that even though
i am around you
i will still be lonely
empty
hollow
d
e
a
d
.
you don't need me
to help you live
i just might
rub off on you
and suck the life right
out.
i don't want
you
to feel this way
ever
ever
ever
ever
ever.
help me
i'm drowning
in the empty air
that was my life.

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    amazing poem...very real and original and....I'm sorry if you really feel that way...I can relate to this...well take care.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    amazing poem...very real and original and....I'm sorry if you really feel that way...I can relate to this...well take care.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    awesome hun! great terrific wonderful...
    you're an awesome poet.... its sad and makes me sad especially if this is true for you..... if it is and you EVER want to talk... i dont care if you think you'll suck the life out of me or not,... im strong and i can handle other ppl's pain... just im me on aim.. CuteLovePancake
    much love
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    Wow, do you really feel this way girl?? Sorry I havent really kept in contact this summer, I've been working almost full time at Kate 'n' Ally's and soooo busy...U should come by and see me sometime... or call me (2306070)

    But now, for the poem...that was AWESOME!!!! let me repeat AWESOME!!! oh my gosh i had 2 read it like 5 times i LOVE it!!! it was so just great...flowed PERFECTLY!! i see u havent written in a while but this one was GREAT!!

    oh ya, and i got this pretty little blue journal and i'm writing like ALL of my poems down into it and like decorating the pages and stuff...it's awesome i'll have to show it to ya sometime...okay well i'm gona go now...it's like 4 in the morning...lol...that's the only time i really have time for anything...haha!

    okay lylas!-
    xoxo-Sierra Rae

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