Tired

It touch my heart. I can't understand pain of this poem. I can't feel it.
5/5

Brilliant write. very powerful and relatable. some fantastic word play in this, such as this particular stanza:

"...I’m tired of my tears
Two tiring eyes
Sadness undisguised
Tired to afraid tired of fears..."

i can feel the despair within this piece, the emotion. fantastic write. very well done!

Hey, I think this poem is just fantastic.
I loved the way you wrote it. and the beginning and ending was just great.
and I liked this part the best:
I’m tired of everything being the same
The hopeless life
Living on the edge of the knife
Tired of playing this pointless game

you're really talented. don't stop
writing. looking forward to read more
of your poems.
take care,
marjan
P.S. and thanks for that comment.
It made me happy(better to say
happier because I was already happy)
thanks again.

Lovely! i like the rhyme.
its nice reading more of ur poems
keep it up! good job
bharti

Lovely poem
the rhyme scheme was interesting and the repetition worked well with the poem
well done