Without you

by Arora   Jul 10, 2005

Feeling my Hurt
Wiping my Tears

Siting alone
without you near

You left me
In the Cold

With nothing
But Myself

Out there to rot
Alone with no one else

I wanted to be with you
I wanted to stay forever

I never thought you'd have to go
At least never did I think PuertoRico

I call you everyday
Tears fill my eyes

You're fading away
In my mind

All I see now
Are your Blue-green eyes

Sometimes I wonder
if you ever think of me
Or how my eyes look

I want you back
I need you back

Please hear my plea
And come back to me

You asked me out
Once again

This time do you
Think we'll remain?

Together forever
is what I wish

I'll love you forever

I want to die together

After all, you are
My most Beloved treasure

~ © Copyrighted ~


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  • 14 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Beautiful poem...I love this part especially:

    "You're fading away
    In my mind

    All I see now
    Are your Blue-green eyes"

    I personally think you could do more without so much rhyming, but that's your style and it works.


  • 14 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    I liked the other ones better cause they were on a more universal level. Thisone seems to be a little more about personal experience.

  • 14 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Absolutely beautiful! Sounds like true love! I hope things will work out for you! ~Brooke~

  • 14 years ago

    by Bredada

    i feel like dat alot i love your poem

  • 14 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I'm in love with the last line!
    I loved it
    thx for the r/c