You saved me

by Stacinator   Jul 12, 2005


I had hit rock bottom,
and was filled with confusion.
Every light I saw,
was just an illusion.

I thought I knew what I wanted,
but apparently I was wrong.
because nothing felt right,
until you came along.

It has only been a few days,
but already I've noticed perfection.
You've picked my heart up,
and pointed me in the right direction.

Now it's your vision in my head,
every hour of every day.
Just the thought of you,
takes my fears away.

Why must you give me,
those little butterflies?
They flutter around all day
and make me tingle inside.

I've never been so happy,
but I wouldn't call it luck.
because once you've hit rock bottom...
The only way you can go is up :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    omgosh that was awesome!! i can soo relate to that poem!! that how my friend feels about me!!!!!! my begining to feel that way about him too!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    That's awesome.. your ryhmes are amazing. The passion and emotion made this a really amazing poem. I like it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    omg! i love the ending! it fit in perfect with the whole poem...wonderful job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Hey awesome poem. I loved the rhyme scheme.. it sounded really great. I think the ending is really good too! 5/5! Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I loved the ending! Another amazing write! I can't seem to write love poems you do it quite well! ~Brooke~