Let me go

by Georgi   Jul 13, 2005


Would it hurt do you know?
Jumping to the ground,
Would your body flow?
And hit without a sound?

Is it always instant death?
As you hit the cold, hard floor.
Would you take your one last breath?
Or would it leave you wanting more...

Do you breathe as you go down,
Or give up in between?
Would you smile, cry or frown?
What does suicide really mean?

The easy way out, choosing not to live.
Who would the death hurt more?
The people whose pain haunt their everyday lives?
Or the pain the family endure?

Imagine being trapped inside a room
With no windows, and no door.
Being cursed with loneliness, death and gloom
As your legs fall through the floor.

Imagine pain and endless tears,
Invisible to those who can see,
Trapped alone for too many years,
Just imagine being like me.

Falling endlessly, without a stop,
Until you hit the floor you fear.
Falling down a 400 meter drop,
Doesn't sound like a bad idea...

So let me go and let me soar,
until i hit that ground.
Don't mourn for me, don't cry anymore
Watch me die without a sound.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    AWW this poem is so sad!!!*tear Great job and you an excellent writer...

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awwwww.....don't give up.... If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you. Please don't forget that. :o)

    ((((((Big Hugs)))))))

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Sorry, I didn't mean you ansewerd the questions. You asked the questions and then went on to how you feel! Sorry I'm a bit tired.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I liked the way you asked questions and then later answered them. That was very creative. This is just my opinion, I think if you took few of the lines and switched them around a bit it would flow better. Anyway, I liked the creative idea good work! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kel

    wow that is really good....5/5

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