by amelia Jul 13, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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This day I didn't want to see, |
by Biscuit
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I love the rhyming in this poem, makes it flow really well. xx |
by Jonathan
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Very good... the rhymes are amazing.... 5/5.... |
by Amanda
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I understand totally, i've felt this way before. You'll be ok cos i was. We have to be strong for ourselves and the other person. Keep it up, great piece :) |
by .
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This is really good. Just like all of your other peoms! 5/5 Keep it up. |
by x Saiya
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Another amazing poem! Such a sad thing.. :'( Keep up the outstanding work amy :) |