Forever broken heart

by amelia   Jul 13, 2005


This day I didn't want to see,
but it just happened to me,
This is the news I didn't want to hear,
and now my eye can’t stop its tear.
Can it really be this way?
That you won’t be here to stay?
Your departure would make me sad,
Never knew it would hurt this bad!
True I know, you must leave,
why does my soul still grieve?
This is going to break my heart;
I really can’t live with us apart.
Say you'll try or say you may,
At least keep the promise that you'll stay.
It's hard to believe but it’s true.
I never learnt to live without you!
You’ll be gone away;
you’ll be gone far,
But in me you'll leave a scar,
a broken heart that cannot be mended..
because it still grieves of a friendship that ended!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I love the rhyming in this poem, makes it flow really well. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Very good... the rhymes are amazing.... 5/5....

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I understand totally, i've felt this way before. You'll be ok cos i was. We have to be strong for ourselves and the other person. Keep it up, great piece :)

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    This is really good. Just like all of your other peoms! 5/5 Keep it up.
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Another amazing poem! Such a sad thing.. :'( Keep up the outstanding work amy :)