by Avellana Jul 15, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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In the quiet of sleep and the darkness of night |
by Haley
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This is a fantastic poem!! It's one of those where you can just visualize and it's wonderful! Keep it up! Thank you so much btw for commenting on mine! It's means so much!! GL with those nightmares btw! |
by Amanda Bee
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Great poem. The flow was incredible and theimagery was great. I know how bad nightmares can be and you captured the feeling magnificently. Good job:) And thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot! |
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This is so good, the description of the nightmare is so frightening. Perfect how you made the reader feel that it would happen again and again. |
by brittany
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WOW 5/5 GREAT WRK KEEP IT UP |
by Jane
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great poem, nightmares i hate 'em. |