Goodbyes

by Britney   Jul 19, 2005


A rose petal falls upon the floor,
She walks in slamming the door.

Just another day in her small life,
She was supposed to end up being his wife.

And things just haven’t been the same,
He’s the only one there is to blame.

He gave her a dozen roses that day,
But it was the same day he told her that he was going away.

It was in the best interest for “them”,
But that just made her heart beat come to an end.

He was trying to pursue his career,
Just leaving her with a heartbreak, and full of fear.

So much for their life together,
He was leaving her today, forever.

So she said her goodbyes,
And walked out of his life with tears in her eyes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    awww this one is so sweet...i love how the idea progresses til the last stanza and that just ends it perfectly. great idea to write about and good word choice, i could feel the emotion in it. take care

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This is a great poem and I'm sure many women can relate! Great job! 5/5...again...:o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    If that's based on an experience, which I think, then I'm sorry for you, know how it feels. Well written poem though.

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by fallen angel

    i love your style of writing. its really good. all your poems are fab, keep writing. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Very well written, flowed nicely and liked the way you used your ideas. good job! 5/5

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